Now that I've read 3 chapters - here are a few thoughts (because you asked 🙂) The story reads (in my mind) like a movie - in a good way - I can picture it as a movie, while I'm reading. Sometimes, I don't like that effect, but it works well with this story. I think the premise would appeal to a range of people (thinking about my son here, who doesn't read, but would be immediately drawn to a plot about double-crossing a co-worker).
Probably because I am including lots of dialogue. But in movies you don’t get to dive into the heads of the characters and describe their thoughts and feelings. Movie makers have to rely on the actors, their expressions and gestures, and the music for all that. So far am having fun with this story. Hope you keep reading it!
Now that I've read 3 chapters - here are a few thoughts (because you asked 🙂) The story reads (in my mind) like a movie - in a good way - I can picture it as a movie, while I'm reading. Sometimes, I don't like that effect, but it works well with this story. I think the premise would appeal to a range of people (thinking about my son here, who doesn't read, but would be immediately drawn to a plot about double-crossing a co-worker).
Probably because I am including lots of dialogue. But in movies you don’t get to dive into the heads of the characters and describe their thoughts and feelings. Movie makers have to rely on the actors, their expressions and gestures, and the music for all that. So far am having fun with this story. Hope you keep reading it!
I’m looking forward to it!